Hololive ID 2nd gen: The game (Fanmade)

hi! i found you on r/visualnovels!

firstly, your appreciation for them is adorable! i'm a hololive fan myself too, but i'm yet to know the new members. anyways, it's cute how you made a fangame for them!

however, even though i'm aware it's not a visual novel made to be taken seriously and mostly developed for fun and admiration for the idols, i hate it that i have to say the story is unbearably... off. i can't play it to the end, i'm sorry. the first five minutes should be the hook, but the content is all over the place, really. characters' reactions are nonsensical and feel forced for the sake of a plot.

still at the first five minutes: random pop-up memory about a random crazy girl saying random things and who randomly happens to have the most random characteristics that a supposed treasure book stated as the person who'd show the way to find the treasure (which isn't even mentioned at all so far).  

i don't know how ollie's mind works, but mine wouldn't ever be okay with walking at night with a total stranger who "explained" why they think i'm the one to help them finding the treasure. as for the comic side, yes, this nonsense makes me ???? and laugh awkwardly because it's nonsense. 

once again, it's cute! loved your way of showing how you like them. but it could have been so much better. you seem so creative! please try developing more ideas and making them more sense-acceptable!